Yo
Your too wack to compete
Your damn lyrics ain't even complete
My rap game is neat
So go ahead and take a seat
Watch my show
Y'all gonna feel me when i feel da flow
Dont make my minds blow
Im here to bring hip-hop
Bigger than fat joe
Your spits are so slow
That make me say whoa
Your not in my league, your way too below
Your career is 100% trash
My raps are probably quicker than the runnin of steve nash
Do i make my self clear?
Dont make me get too high for you, queer
This is my year
Some people hatin on me
Cuz my raps include racism
And dont worry
This will be no more plagiarism
This is the end of all
Go ahead sent this to yo friend
Dont piss me off again or ill start a brawl
Worse than the pacers and ron artest
I hope you dont get too stressed, god ill be blessed
Basick
Apr 5 2005, 07:48 PM
That was horrible
Basick as hell and just horrible
Try to say it out loud, it has no flow whatsoever
That was f**king grade school poetry... lol... try multi sylabble rhyming...
Like you said
"wack~to~compete"
Back~to~ya~feet
Slapped~with~the~heat
Attack~and~you'll~see
Etc... see how every syllabble rhymed with its corresponding sylabble?... that makes you rhymes more complex and flow better...
Funbobby
Apr 5 2005, 07:52 PM
Just cut the:
'dont piss me off again or ill start a brawl'
And its alright for a kid
MiszSERENiTY
Apr 5 2005, 08:58 PM
O-M-G
You s**. And I`m not even saying that just because I don`t like oyou...you really do s**. That sounded like something someone would make up as a joke. I say you go back to stealing other peoples lyrics...you won`t sound as doo-doo dumb
Baku
Apr 5 2005, 09:00 PM
Omg you s** at life cuz that sounds a lot better for you than rap
KIERYN
Aug 29 2008, 10:11 PM
I HEARD THA RAP BEFOR I EVEN USED THAT IN RAP BATTLE BEFOR IT WAS POSTED HERE
ReggieM
Aug 29 2008, 10:39 PM
What was it elis rap
Silverbolt