Yo Your too wack to compete Your damn lyrics ain't even complete My rap game is neat So go ahead and take a seat Watch my show Y'all gonna feel me when i feel da flow Dont make my minds blow Im here to bring hip-hop Bigger than fat joe Your spits are so slow That make me say whoa Your not in my league, your way too below Your career is 100% trash My raps are probably quicker than the runnin of steve nash Do i make my self clear? Dont make me get too high for you, queer This is my year Some people hatin on me Cuz my raps include racism And dont worry This will be no more plagiarism This is the end of all Go ahead sent this to yo friend Dont piss me off again or ill start a brawl Worse than the pacers and ron artest I hope you dont get too stressed, god ill be blessed Basick Apr 5 2005, 07:48 PM That was horrible Basick as hell and just horrible Try to say it out loud, it has no flow whatsoever That was f**king grade school poetry... lol... try multi sylabble rhyming... Like you said "wack~to~compete" Back~to~ya~feet Slapped~with~the~heat Attack~and~you'll~see Etc... see how every syllabble rhymed with its corresponding sylabble?... that makes you rhymes more complex and flow better... Funbobby Apr 5 2005, 07:52 PM Just cut the: 'dont piss me off again or ill start a brawl' And its alright for a kid MiszSERENiTY Apr 5 2005, 08:58 PM O-M-G You s**. And I`m not even saying that just because I don`t like oyou...you really do s**. That sounded like something someone would make up as a joke. I say you go back to stealing other peoples lyrics...you won`t sound as doo-doo dumb Baku Apr 5 2005, 09:00 PM Omg you s** at life cuz that sounds a lot better for you than rap KIERYN Aug 29 2008, 10:11 PM I HEARD THA RAP BEFOR I EVEN USED THAT IN RAP BATTLE BEFOR IT WAS POSTED HERE ReggieM Aug 29 2008, 10:39 PM What was it elis rap Silverbolt