Marvin obregon - Freestyle friday paraghraphs lyrics

i really dont know how to rap i guess its cause i dont give a crap, this is my topic sentence i hope u like it and if u dont, well u could ignore it, im told that i need to put concrete details, but if i do that it may be lethal, i dont think i have time to finish this, but im gonna try to do this. oh well i could actually say i tryed so if u give me a 0 on this I'mma say you lied lol the topic sentence,(the beggining) is the top bun of the burger the concrete details,(details) is like the meat of the burger Next is the commentary, (your opinion) Which is know as the tomatoes, lettuce, and cheese the Conclusion sentence,(the end) is the final peace of the burger which is the bottom bun of the burger. and this is the comparison of literature and food